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Hong Kingston’s “The Woman Warrior”, she portrays her own first-generation-immigrant
experience as a child growing up in the United States in the 1940’s. The
immigrant experience is certainly unique, but the mindset of people towards immigrants
has definitely changed as time progressed. Kingston depicts the struggle of language
barrier that exists within immigrants through her writing. Although, the
experience for those immigrating in to the United States today, will evidently be
different from those that immigrated in the during Kingston time.
Kingston predominantly portrays her
own struggle as a child growing up in United States with the language barrier
in her autobiography. Learning a new language is a challenge for most people,
and since English is also not my first language, I can understand the difficulties
that Kingston faces. “Speak up”, is what I would normally hear as Kingston also
mentioned in her story. The level of confidence required to speak a completely
new language and overcoming the fear of mispronouncing words is tremendous.
After running the sentences repeatedly over and over in your own head, and
being asked to speak it the second time only blows out the candle that was starting
to catch fire. Kingston possibly felt this way and is potentially why she made
a slow progress breaking out of her silence. Kingston even illustrates her
struggle to understand the English language as an immigrant through the
character “I”. She mentions that the Chinese “I” (我)
having seven strokes and wears a hat. Thus, she cannot comprehend the
simplicity in the “I” within the English language compared to the “I” in
Chinese. Kingston also exemplifies the difficulty of expressing her speech in
English through her sentence structure, for example, “Tatagimmesomecandy,” portraying
her struggle in language as an immigrant.
The immigrant experience Kingston
had during her childhood was certainly more difficult compared to those immigrating
nowadays considering the ongoing globalization. People are much more accepting
of immigrants today compared to Kingston’s time. Historically, the United
States was plagued with racist employment legislation, therefore Chinese
immigrants did not receive as much opportunity and respect as they should have.
Kingston’s father was an educated man with a degree but had to work a menial
job due to racism. This would be completely different today as population of
Asian-Americans are increasing and jobs are not given out to certain races but
it considers skills and capabilities for the job. Although racism still exists,
the mindset this generation is much more lenient and accepting, making the
transition for those immigrating more welcoming. Without a doubt, I think that
when cultures and people integrate it creates diversity which allows for
society to thrive and improve as a whole.
The experience that Kingston portrays
in her story shows her hardships that resolves to a good ending. I would
personally change the learning experience in this story and how Kingston
chooses to portray herself. Overcoming the steep learning curve for a new language
and the experience of being in a new country which is always fascinating, and I
would choose to portray its optimism. In addition, I wouldn’t abuse the
difference in race and nationality as much as Kingston has in her story, but
rather embrace the fact that we are different and diverse, which would bring up
the level of confidence in every immigrant.
You did an awesome job at giving background information about the author and analyzing those facts with the text. You also gave a lot evidence that corresponds to not only your analysis of the text, but to also your own personal experience. But the only thing I would suggest to change to improve your essay is being more specific in your thesis. I would just try to list out specific concepts that relates to the part where you talked about how the immigrant experience during Kingston's era and today are different. Overall, your essay presented a great historical analysis about Asian immigration in the U.S.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great analysis. I like that how you compare the immigration in the past with situation nowadays under the ongoing globalization. You did a great job relating Kingston’s father’s issue to the racism Asian-Americans face. In the last paragraph, you also give out your personal feeling from the perspective of Kingston, which is great. Overall, it is awesome except that there are a few grammar mistakes.
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