‘Diving
into the Wreck’ by American poet and feminist, Adrienne Rich, was one of the
most influential poet during the time, receiving the National Book award for
Poetry. She wrote ‘Diving into the Wreck’ in 1971 which tells the story of the
narrator, a solo diver who explores a ship wreck, describing their surroundings
and actions of entering the ocean and reaching the wreck. At the time of
writing this poem, America was going through a lot of change including the women’s
right movement during the 1970s in which one of the key figures being Rich.
Rich grew up in a remarkably educated family, her father being a renowned
pathologist at The John Hopkins university and her mother who was a composer
and pianist. Rich herself excelled in academics, attending and getting a
diploma from Radcliffe college. Then, she married an economics professor at
Harvard and have three children before moving to New York to pursue feminist
activism. She would later leave her husband (who eventually committed suicide)
and identify as lesbian.
Diving into
the Wreck utilizes conceit (an extended metaphor that compares two unlikely
things in a witty way) to express the poet’s emotions regarding her transformation
of identities throughout her life and the difficulty of going against the norms
of society and patriarchy. Although, the poem does not explicitly state her
emotions and has a rather solemn tone, the poet uses a number of literary
devices like visual imagery and symbol to convey her thoughts. We see in the
first line that Rich is already using a symbol of the “book of myths” which
might suggest that the speaker must know the old stories of the journey before
embarking them. Rich also mentions “loaded the camera” and “checked the edge of
the knife-blade” to point out the importance of recording and being aware of
the danger of the journey. The book of myths might particular point to the
myths of patriarchy which split the sexes into two factions that have a perpetual
battle of the more dominant sex. The knife may be referring to Rich cutting through
societal gender roles and discovering her true identity. Rich uses imagery as
the speaker descends into the water - “bluer and then green and then black I am
blacking out”- to signify the control of the unconscious and the struggle to break
away from this controlling factor. The reference to Jack Cousteau can also been
seen in a feminist perspective where Cousteau was a prominent figure in underwater
exploring who had a diligent team working with him whereas the speaker tells us
“but here alone”. This line illustrates the treatment of women who is left
alone to fend and explore for herself. In the sixth stanza, Rich uses the words
"And I am here, the mermaid whose […] I am she: I am he” to encourage the
idea that women must create new myths and new definitions of society which will
heal humanity. Women should use their loneliness to achieve success, discover
themselves, and explore the female psyche. Lastly, the last line of the poem, "A
book of myths in which our names do not appear," shows us the repeated use
of book of myths which might suggest a different connotation that shows Rich’s
feeling about women not getting recognition in the past. I believe that Rich
advises the readers of the concept of Rebirth where one must recognize their
journeys in order to change them ultimately referencing the wreck to treatment
of women in a patriarchal society.
In
conclusion, Adrienne Rich’s ‘Diving into the wreck’ is a poem relating to feminism
and the rebirth of women. She used this poem to express her thoughts and
emotions regarding conditions of women during the midst of the women’s right
movement, the civils right movement, and the Vietnam war. This poem helped bring
attention to the situation and progressed the rights of women.
If your last paragraph was reworked into a thesis and added into the thesis your blog post would be more elevated. More of that type of analysis would be really nice too. The background information is perfect for readers to understand the influences on Rich's writing but maybe cut out details that aren't as pertinent to the points you are trying to make. I loved how you focused on feminism and it was an interesting choice considering I would associate the conceit with her marriage instead.
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