In the short story “A Rose for
Emily” by William Faulkner, the dynamic of power between Southern Whites and
the African American people had and underlined feel of ongoing degradation.
During the era of this story, the civil war had ended in 1865 which allowed for
the slaves to be freed from slavery. Yet, the people of the South proceeded to
act as though they were of superior ranking compared to the African American
citizens. Within the story, the main character Miss Emily Grierson was a prime
example of this superiority stance. She was portrayed as a White woman that may
have been mentally ill yet was stuck in a pre-civil war state of mind. Her
helper, a black man who catered to Miss Emily’s needs, was displayed as an
unspoken slave for which he served her until she died.
There were also moments within the
story that reflected on how the town persisted to degrade African Americans by
treating them as a lesser form of slavery. For example, Colonel Sartoris, the
mayor during the time, enacted a law where all Black women had to wear an apron
when roaming the streets. This displays a clear act for keeping the African
American woman powerless despite the overturn of slavery.
In the story “Shooting an Elephant”
by George Orwell, there is a struggle of the Englishmen trying to dominate
power over the Burmese people. In 1824, the English invaded and took over Burma
but later the Burmese people began demanding control back with their actions. Through
Orwell’s experience as a police officer in Burma, he begins the story by saying
that he was “hated by large numbers of people”. Orwell speaks about how the Burmese
had very little respect for the Europeans. Even though he was of the law, they would
laugh and taunt him because of his race. Throughout the story, he expressed an
overwhelming sense of unimportance for being European but was granted a moment
of superiority when making the decision to kill the elephant. He stated, “They
did not like me, but with the magical rifle in my hands I was momentarily worth
watching.” Although he knew that he would rather avoid killing the elephant, he
felt the shift in power when executing the murder.
Not only was there racism
expressed towards the Europeans, there was also a reciprocation of racist
intent towards the Burmese. A passage stated, “it was a damn shame to shoot an
elephant for killing a coolie, because an elephant was worth more than any damn
Coringhee coolie.” The younger European police officers felt that due to his
race the human life did not matter as much as the elephant’s.
When comparing the two stories,
the dynamics in power show opposite spectrums of racism. For Faulkner’s story,
it expressed a normalized stigma for hidden racism due to the aftermath of the
Civil War. Although people may have realized that keeping an African American
as a slave was wrong, they continuously kept a separation between the two
groups of people and made one feel just as powerless as a they were during the
times of slavery. For Orwell’s story, it expressed a need for some sense of
power after being blatantly powerless from both the Burmese and the Europeans.
Both stories used the influence of race to dominate in superiority.
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You did a great job of creating a deep analysis of racism for both "A Rose for Emily and Shooting an Elephant". I also think that you used a good set of evidence to back up your analysis. However, I was just a little confused on how you organized your essay since it did start out with a paragraph just for "A Rose for Emily" and then one just for "Shooting an Elephant". Maybe next time you can include an introductory paragraph as well so that the purpose of your essay and your argument can be clearer. Overall, I think you created an interesting essay and a eye opening analysis.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your analysis. Your use of quotes from the Orwell's piece really helped back up the point you were trying to make. The analysis of these quotes were also very direct.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I was not expecting to read about two stories. It would be beneficial to have a short intro paragraph, as said by Aeon, to help transition the short analysis better.
Overall, you stated points relevant to your topic and I found your analysis interesting.