Deven Benitez
Topic #1
In both “A Rose for Emily” and “Shooting an Elephant”
similar characteristics were presented in that a sense of power, superiority,
or prejudice toward other races from whites was common. The 1930’s was no easy
time for anyone in the Unites states because it was in the midst of the Great
Depression. Being a southern white was a lot easier than being an African
American at this time though. Even though slavery was abolished racism still
remained prominent in the south. Whites just thought they were superior to the
African Americans. Whites demanded that African Americans be fired if a white
man was looking for a job. Even though slavery was so long ago it seems to have
left a lasting mark on how southern whites felt towards African Americans. For
example, “By the time economic incentives to coerce black labor subsided with
the introduction of machinery to harvest cotton in the 1930s, anti-black
sentiment was culturally entrenched among local whites” (Susan Hagen). This is
even evident in the writing back in the 1930s. In “A Rose for Emily” the
character is centered around a white female who comes from a time where
prejudice was considered normal. It is evident in the writing that Faulkner was
trying to show how southern whites treated African Americans at the time. For
example, “We had long since given up trying to get information from the
Negro”. You can see here that the
character has been stripped of his human qualities. He can even be thought of
as property in this story as he seems to do everything for Miss Emily. Another
example showing the prejudice against African Americans is right in the
beginning when Faulkner writes, “Alive Miss Emily had been a tradition…no Negro
woman should appear on the street without an apron-remitted her taxes”. It just
goes to show that African Americans were seen as people to work (aka property)
and whites were celebrated. This was a similar situation in Britain/Burma in
the 1930s. British invaded Burma for a desire of the teak, oil, and rubies in
Burma. They ultimately justified there action by saying the place was run by a
tyrant who was going to help France which was a lie. They were taking over them
and civilizing the savages you can say. Even though the economy was growing under
British rule almost all the wealth was in the hands of the British. It was
obvious that the Burmese did not like the British as there were a series of
protest and strikes against the British. It was also evident that the British
really had no respect for the Burmese either as in the story, “Shooting an
elephant”. It is centered around a man working as a police officer in Burma for
the British. He hates his job, but is in a conflict between what he thinks is
right. Orwell writes, “In the end the sneering yellow faces or young men that
met me everywhere the insults hooted after me when I was at a safe distance got
badly on my nerves”. This just shows the hatred between the two and the superior
attitude the British had toward the Burmese. Saying racist things that are
meant to insult them. Also in the end of the story a man says, “An elephant is
worth more than a damn Coringhee coolie”. He is saying just because this
elephant killed a coolie doesn’t mean it should have been killed, but if it
were to have killed a British man it would have been a different story. Both
stories share a power dynamic that has a sense that the white man is better
than everyone else and represents the other races in a low way that almost
makes them seem less human. There is a difference in each case though in that
in America the whites didn’t really justify their reasons for acting superior
and putting down others. In Britain they made up a reason to feel superior or
act like there trying to help others when all the really wanted were the resources
that the people they felt superior to had.
All your ideas are very well written out and this I really like your connection of the two stories to not just power but superiority and prejudice. When reading these stories I thought very broadly of the terms and how they occurred in the stories, but you go into great detail and have evidence to back up your statements. It would've been easier to read if you broke this one paragraph into multiple paragraphs and have the ones with similar ideas in the same paragraph and so on. Besides that, I really like your ideas and your connections between the story and the historical evidence you included in your piece.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you introduced your post by giving importance to the context and connecting that to the plot of both texts. Although, like Tara said, you could have improved on the structure by breaking your post into 3-4 paragraphs which includes a conclusion. You could also remove a few redundant sentences in your introduction about the state of white power in America. Overall, you did a good job on introducing your points and connecting it with contextual evidence and quotes.
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